2021.12.05 21:05 ClockworKubrick Mighty + arrived today
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2021.12.05 21:05 Griblix When to split a novel up.
TL;DR - At what point, either judging by story content or word count, would you consider splitting a single novel up into smaller parts?
I got a story, and it's sitting at a bit under 160k words. I'm aware that such a high number falls squarely into "Good luck with that" territory for a first-time publishing attempt - not impossible, but it'll have to be a real winner to get an agent's attention. It used to be considerably larger, but cleaning up the prose and gutting unnecessary moments helped bring it down to where it is.
It wasn't until I started looking into critiques on a possible query attempt that I started thinking there might be a problem here. Mainly the fact that the story starts off going in one direction, then there's an abrupt change of course as the main characters make a discovery that throws their plans out the proverbial window. Along with that, the pacing is pretty hectic overall. Some parts of it have reasonable in-world explanations, while others don't really have that. All of this is because I arbitrarily decided that this story all needs to fit into one novel, dealing with pacing and bloat by culling more and more of what happens.
Now I'm wondering if I should go in the opposite direction with it. Make that first "chunk" of the story its own novel, then make what happens afterward its own novel. Or even a pair there as well - one novel to detail how the mains' plans fall apart, one to show them pursuing their new goal, and one to show their struggles after their efforts lead to a pretty major crisis later on, as well as the resolution to everything. It should be possible to keep the tension while allowing for more breathing room, and it'd give me a chance to explore aspects of the world that I half-detailed in the current iteration.
Up until now, the idea of expanding rather than contracting just seemed repulsive. But now I'm intrigued. I just want to make sure I execute it correctly.
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2021.12.05 21:05 Low-Tap-2134 Lovenese 3 twists
I don’t know if anyone else is having this issues but when I insert the Lovenese 3 it just turns and ends up side ways which isn’t pleasurable at all! My gynaecologist has never mentioned I have a tilted vagina so I’m a little confused. Does anyone else have this problem? Plus the antenna sucks and does even touch my clitoris even when I put it straight -.- I was given it for free so no big deal but it’s still annoying
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2021.12.05 21:05 im4peace Latkes for the last night of Hanukkah
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2021.12.05 21:05 laughingbuddhaballs Does anyone know where I can find the rest of this radio interview?
The link to the interview is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XPFeUvGbpGM&t=145s
It cuts off and there is no part 2 posted like it says it will be.
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2021.12.05 21:04 Hexatekin Gallium installer crashing - Lenovo Thinkpad 11e 3rd gen
I've managed to get the live image of GalliumOS booted up from a USB on my Lenovo Thinkpad 11e 3rd gen. I flashed the firmware, removed the write protect screw, and I'm using the UEFI firmware.
However, I've tried running the desktop installer twice now with "Erase disk and install GalliumOS" as the installation type selected and default settings.
Each time the installer crashes at the same place, right after it says "installing the grub2 package."
Any ideas of how I can complete the installation process?
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2021.12.05 21:04 Ace_RW1 the new update may have broke the coldheart
I was using the coldheart against the destroyer yet it was only doing it normal 1 damage instead of dealing 2% max hp
Im on a multiplayer world so that may effect it try it and see if it works
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2021.12.05 21:04 introsort [Hiring] KundenberaterIn - German Speaking - Ireland - Careers at Apple (Apple)
To learn more and apply for the job, please see KundenberaterIn - German Speaking - Ireland - Careers at Apple
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2021.12.05 21:04 Gecko2002 Based on u/shipelectronic8626's post
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2021.12.05 21:04 Permatheus 28 [M4F] I want friendship and good conversation
Are you good at conversation? Want to get to know someone and actually talk about things? I’m easy going and want the same thing. Never know until you try right?
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2021.12.05 21:04 IUOpt [WTS] BNIB Ballistic Advantage 13.9 Hanson Mid Length Performance w/ Gas Block (IN)
Brand new, sealed in the plastic. 13.9 BA Hanson middy with gas block.
Asking $160 net shipped
Feel free to pm with any questions
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2021.12.05 21:04 SaucdupJacuzzi Why do women scream in intense situations?
At what point in child development are women taught to scream out loud in intense situations? Like if a shooting happens, fight breaks out, etc. My whole life I've noticed when some shit goes down women just automatically synchronize and amp up their screaming and yelling. I was wondering if it's actually something evolutionary that we don't even understand. Like was this response something that helped our cave dwelling ancestors ring alarms for the men to come when there was danger in the village? What do you think?
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2021.12.05 21:04 Sea-Economist1001 Terry Wingdings was the newest recruit at the police academy.
2021.12.05 21:04 Throwaway0821_ Is it safe to disclose information on a parent’s partner?
Hi all. I’m currently going through the vetting process for PC and have a dilemma. My mum’s partner is somewhat abusive and has demanded I do not include him in the vetting formation.
Obviously, I want to put his details down in the name of honesty but I am fearful that should he find out somehow my mum could be put in danger. He has not physically abused her yet but is verbally threatening and has attempted to block her from escaping his house. Mum had to call the police to diffuse the situation.
So essentially, is it safe for me to give as much info as I can to the vetting team without endangering my mum, and would leaving him out of the info hurt my chances of being a PC?
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2021.12.05 21:04 denverayers CHILDREN SHOULDN'T HAVE PHONES!!!!!!!!!
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2021.12.05 21:04 NoLewdsNoLife Beidou (ZaphnArt)
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2021.12.05 21:04 berzelmayr Gandalf the White & Santa Claus
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2021.12.05 21:04 Nicklovin_17 Our cheese and charcuterie board. I'll comment what we used for ours
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2021.12.05 21:04 McCoffeeDeluxe IT'S MY ANNIVERSARY TODAY!!!
2021.12.05 21:04 bloomlights why do i have no desire to improve?
i want to let myself deteriorate to a point where suicide is the clearest and easiest option, i want to sink to a level where i feel so incredibly low that i have the courage to go successfully through with my suicide. i have felt this way for so long, but i don’t know why?
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2021.12.05 21:04 rjtx1999 Old-school checklists
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2021.12.05 21:04 Zandivo Kid Amnesia Standard Vinyl (?)
Anyone else order the standard vinyl and not get it yet? I know they said they ship out the 29th, but I ordered back in September and haven't gotten any updates since the delay.
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2021.12.05 21:04 Deedrinerus_1717 [NA] LFT TIER IV - III. Can FILL ANY position.
2021.12.05 21:04 fskies79 Gesa deleted all of his post… new stuff soon?
2021.12.05 21:04 no_clue97 I waited over a year to get a sweet pool!
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